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2021.3.4大陆雅思大作文8分范文 | 是否应该保护动物

Many animals are endangered. Some people argue that we should only protect animals that are useful to human. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

许多动物濒临灭绝。有些人认为我们应该只保护对人类有用的动物。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

由OGE雅思外籍成员Tessa提供写作思路与范文

8分范文

As more animals become endangered, some to the point of extinction, arguments arise around the value of animal protection. Some argue that it is only necessary to protect those that are useful to humans. This essay will discuss this viewpoint and offer my own thoughts.

Those who argue solely for the protection of animals that benefit us note that protecting all animals is an expensive use of money. They contend that this money could instead go towards scientific and medical research. Furthermore, they assert that it is a waste of resources. The protection of animals requires a great amount of human involvement, supplies and materials, which could be better used for housing, schooling, and roads. Moreover, they argue that by protecting all animals we add no real value to human life. It is not useful to us to safeguard all animals if they cannot provide us with food, protection, or other advantages.

However, I disagree with this stance. It is humankind‘s moral and ethical responsibility to protect and save all animals. By creating an arbitrary position where animals are judged on their usefulness to us, we fail to consider the myriad ways that animals benefit us – not only as food, but also with their companionship, teaching us compassion and empathy. Additionally, other species should be able to live without justification – animals have every right to their own existence, not purely for exploitation by humans. Further, the endangerment and extinction of animals is completely the fault of humans. Through our destruction of their natural habitats, we have removed their source of food and shelter, in turn disrupting and damaging our own the eco-system.

Humans have undoubtedly caused the death and endangerment of many animal species. It is our responsibility to correct this, for our benefit and theirs.

Brainstorming

写作思路

I started with brainstorming and listing reasons for and against protecting all animals. I also did some research online, reading articles from The Guardian, National Geographic, and the BBC. I also investigated websites and journal articles about animal protection, wildlife protection and extinction issues.

我开始头脑风暴,列出不同观点和原因。之后我用网络资源去做调查,我查阅了 The Guardian, National Geographic和the BBC 的文章。最后,我根据保护动物,野生保护,和濒临灭绝的动物等问题作了更多深入调查。

Reasons for

  • Waste of resources
  • Waste of money
  • No real value to humans

同意原因

  • 浪费资源
  • 浪费资金
  • 对人类没有价值

Reasons against

  • Moral and ethical responsibility
  • The protection of natural habitats
  • Circle of life
  • Animals should have right to live
  • Usefulness/benefits can be many different things
  • Eco-system damage

反对原因

  • 人道主义责任
  • 保护自然生物
  • 生物循环
  • 动物也有生的权力
  • 对环境等其它因素的益处
  • 生态环境的破坏

I decided the first paragraph would focus on the reasons for protecting only those animals that are useful to us. As I only had a few reasons for this, I used all the bullet points in the paragraph, expanding on each point.

第一章我注重为什么应该只保护对人类有用的动物,然后用不同的观点去支持这个提议。

The second paragraph focused on the reasons against only protecting animals that are useful to us. My opinion is that all animals should be protected, so I discussed this and the reasons why, picking four main points from the list I made:

第二章我注重为什么人类应该保护所有动物。并且提供我自己的见解,然后我从头脑风暴里选了重要的4个论点并给予解释和分析

  • Moral and ethical responsibility 人道主义责任
  • Eco-system damage 生态环境破坏
  • Animals right to live 动物的权力
  • Other benefits to humans 对人类的非直接好处

Keywords and phrases

关键词

  • endangered animal 濒危生物
  • extinction 灭绝
  • climate change and effects on animals 气候变化对动物影响
  • animal control 动物管控
  • animal ethics 动物道德
  • eco-system damage 生态环境破坏
  • vegetarianism 素食主义者
  • animal rights 动物权益

~End~

Good luck with your IELTS test

【作者介绍】Tessa,OGE雅思外籍成员,母语为英语,新西兰坎特伯雷大学英语文学和法语专业。

(以上中文由OGE雅思助教团队提供)

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