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2021.2.27大陆雅思大作文8分范文 | 如何解决淡水的需求

Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world. But now increasing demand has made it a global problem. What are the causes of the increasing demand. What measures can government and individuals take to solve the problem?

淡水在世界某些地区是一种有限的资源。但现在不断增长的需求使其成为一个全球性问题。需求增加的原因是什么?政府和个人可以采取哪些措施来解决问题?

由OGE雅思外籍成员Viola提供写作思路与范文

8分范文

Accessible fresh water only takes up 3% of the world’s water mass. It is a precious and limited resource. Therefore, countries such as Ethiopia, Uganda and Papua New Guinea lack basic access to drinking water. Now, this issue is slowly starting to spread, as the increasing global demand for water has created a worldwide threat of scarcity for clean water.

There are numerous causes that escalate water demand. Primarily, global water use is spiking since there is a surge in population and rise in global average temperature. Higher consumption(大量引用) of water is required for people, animals, and plants to maintain their health. The growth of large cities is also known to feature large amounts of use and wastage of water ranging from irrigation to industrial cleaning.

Although the increasing water demand seems inevitable(必然的), the government can implement some measures to tackle the issue of consumption. One short-term solution is enforcing stricter rules on water usage. Policies to cut or control water usage such as setting pricier water bills could encourage industries to manage water consumption better. Furthermore, subsidies and awards can be offered to companies or organizations that invent innovative ways of saving water. This can promote awareness while supporting practical ways to conserve water.

Additionally, individuals should be mindful of their water consumption too. Water can actually be reused in certain cases, such as using water that isn’t too dirty from washing to water household plants. A large emphasis should also be put on education of the younger generations, so that they know that water is a limited resource and must not be taken for granted.

All in all, a shortage of water would be a dire phenomenon and safety hazard. Countless lives will be lost should this crisis occur globally. That’s why the world is to take prompt and efficient action to mitigate this problem. Hopefully, we will be able to reduce the rate of consumption for this priceless and life-giving resource.

Brainstorming

写作思路

Paragraph 1 – Introduction

Only 3% of the world’s water is accessible fresh water. Ethiopia, Papua New Guinea, Chad, Uganda lack basic access to drinking water – water is contaminated, limited resources. The increasing demand for water has made it a global threat.

第一章

世界上只有百分之三的水是可饮用的。埃塞俄比亚、巴布亚新几内亚、乍得、乌干达等国家甚至无法满足正常饮水的需求。随着需求量的增长,可用水成为全球性稀有资源。

Paragraph 2

Causes of increasing demand: global water use has been increasing. Population rise and an increase in temperature also increases the consumption of water by people, animals, and plants to maintain their health. Cities are also known to have high consumption of water from irrigation to industrial use, cleaning and household.

第二章

因为用水量的增加,需求也有所增加。人口的增加导致了气候变暖和增加饮用水的消耗量。很多工业设施也有很高的需求用水需求量。

Paragraph 3

Government measures: A short-term solution is making stricter rules on water usage. Authority policies to cut water or control usage – higher water bills? More examples. Industrial innovations can be subsidized for water saving inventions.

第三章

政府措施:短期方案是提高用水费用,应用节水政策。更多例子,工业发明替代节水设施。

Paragraph 4

Individuals, be aware of water consumption, reuse water such as using washing water to water plants. Education is required for the next generation.

第四章

个人节水和循环用水,例如,洗菜的水浇花。教育下一代节水意识。

Paragraph 5

A shortage of water would be a dire phenomenon and health hazard. Countless lives will be lost should such a crisis occur globally. Therefore the world is to take prompt and efficient action to mitigate this problem. Hopefully we will be able to slow down the rate of consumption of this precious resource.

第五章

缺水会导致可怕现象和危害健康。无数生命会失去生命。所以,人们应该采取预防措施去避免事情恶化。希望我们的行动可以减缓水资源的流失。

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Good luck with your IELTS test

【作者介绍】Viola,出生于香港,OGE雅思教研团队成员,奥克兰大学跨国文化与创新实践专业,全球研究学士学位课程。(以上中文由OGE雅思助教团队提供)

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