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9月25日大陆雅思写作8分范文 | 人们应不应该跳槽或者在一个工作从一而终

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

与那些频繁换工作的人相比,那些在人生早期就决定了职业道路并坚持走下去的人更有可能拥有令人满意的工作生活。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

***工作类别的题,在2014年1月11日、2014年4月5日、2019年6月7日、2019年12月12日等的考试题目均与“频繁更换工作”这个话题相关。

由OGE雅思外籍成员Tessa提供思路和范文
Brainstorm:

I started by brainstorming the pros and cons of choosing a career path early. I also researched the topic using articles from The Guardian, The New York Times and Al Jazeera, and also using articles from university websites, employment and career websites, and advice from careers advisors. I then listed the reasons:

我首先头脑风暴了选择职业道路的利弊。我还利用《卫报》、《纽约时报》和半岛电视台的文章,以及大学网站、就业和职业网站的文章,以及职业顾问的建议,研究了这个话题。然后我列出了原因:

◆Pros:

  • Provides stability and security
  • Climb the ladder quicker
  • Gain greater knowledge and experience in their chosen area
  • Gives goal to work toward toward

◆赞成的原因

  • 提供稳定性和安全性
  • 晋升要快一点
  • 在他们选择的领域获得更多的知识和经验
  • 有努力的目标

■Cons:

  • Lack of maturity when young
  • Boredom – need variety and challenge
  • Our characters, desires and goals change as we age
  • Lose interest in our career – may become depressed

■反对的原因

  • 年轻时缺乏成熟
  • 无聊-需要变化和挑战
  • 随着年龄的增长,我们的性格、欲望和目标都会发生变化
  • 对事业失去兴趣——可能会变得沮丧

 I decided the first paragraph would focus on the pros, and chose two points to focus:

我决定(主体)第一段将重点放在优点上,并选择了两点作为重点:

☛Paragraph one:

  • Provides stability and security
  • Climb the ladder quicker

☛(主体)第一段

  • 提供稳定性和安全性
  • 爬梯子要快一点

I decided the second paragraph would focus on my own opinion and give the cons of choosing a career path early. Again I focused on two points to develop:

我决定(主体)第二段将集中在我自己的观点上,并给出尽早选择职业道路的缺点。我再次强调了两点去展开说明:

☛Paragraph two:

  • Lack of maturity when young
  • Boredom – need variety and challenge

☛(主体)第二段

  • 年轻时缺乏成熟
  • 无聊-需要变化和挑战

Key words and phrases:

关键词和短语

career path职业道路

employment工作

career choices职业选择

occupation职业

jobs工作

employment受雇

career advice职业建议

job trajectory工作轨迹

change in career转行

8分范文

Deciding what career path to take is an important, significant decision, and one that can have life-determining consequences. Historically, most people have chosen a career path early in their lives and kept to it, believing this results in a more satisfying working life. This essay will examine the pros and cons of such a choice, and offer my own opinion.

Choosing our livelihood early does provide stability. For those finishing high school, choosing a degree based on your future vocation engenders a sense of security. This allows students to focus on their goals, without the doubt or lack of certainty that may arise for a person unsure on what career they will pursue. Furthermore, by choosing a job early and keeping to it, a person can expect to be able to climb the career ladder faster than those who have switched careers often. They are more knowledgeable, experienced and have a wider number of contacts within their chosen industry.

However, I believe that by choosing a career path at an early age, people risk making an important decision while they are emotionally immature, not knowing enough about themselves before making such a crucial choice. Therefore, they may find that they complete their tertiary studies only to find that they are no longer interested in this career path. One study found that a staggering 9 out of 10 people aged between 21 and 65 say that they regret their career choices. Moreover, by staying within one career we risk becoming bored, with a lack of variety, challenges and new information. By diversifying our employment, we are more likely to be invigorated by our jobs and feel fulfilled.

Though career stability is important, it is equally essential to consider the ways our lives and indeed, characters, may change as we age, and so too may our career interests. 

译文

决定走什么样的职业道路是一个重要的、重大的决定,并且可能会产生决定一生的后果。从历史上看,大多数人在人生早期就选择了一条职业道路并坚持下去,认为这会带来更令人满意的工作生活。本文将探讨这种选择的利弊,并提出自己的看法。

尽早选择我们的生计确实能带来稳定。对于那些高中毕业的人来说,根据你未来的职业选择学位会产生一种安全感。这使学生能够专注于自己的目标,而不必怀疑或缺乏确定性,因为对于一个不确定自己将从事什么职业的人来说,这种情况可能会出现。此外,通过提前选择工作并坚持下去,一个人可以期望能够比那些经常转行的人更快地爬上职业阶梯。他们知识更渊博,经验更丰富,在所选行业内有更多的人脉。

然而,我相信,如果人们在很小的时候就选择了一条职业道路,那么当他们在情感上还不成熟,在做出如此重要的选择之前对自己了解不够的时候,他们就有可能做出一个重要的决定。因此,他们可能会发现他们完成了高等教育,却发现他们对这条职业道路不再感兴趣。一项研究发现,在21岁到65岁之间的人中,十分之九的人说他们后悔自己的职业选择。此外,由于缺乏多样性、挑战和新信息,如果只从事一种职业,我们可能会感到厌倦。通过使我们的就业多样化,我们更有可能因工作而充满活力,并感到满足。

虽然职业稳定是重要的,但同样重要的是要考虑我们的生活方式和性质,可能随着年龄的变化,我们的职业兴趣也可能改变。

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