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雅思写作真题8分范文「参加团队运动更有益,还是参加个人运动更好 」

Some people think that it’s more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But othersthink taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss bothviews and give your own opinion.题 目:有些人认为参加团队运动更有益,比如足球。但也有人认为参加个人运动更好,比如游泳。讨论两种观点并给出自己的观点。

OGE 外籍老师 Tessa 为同学们整理了本话题所需的论据,来自纽约时报、BBC、卫报以及诸多体育网站,体育赛事广告网站以及心理杂志。并附上自己的范文,希望能帮助到大家。

| Brainstorming 

First I thought of the benefits of teamsports and individual sports, and listed these. I then did some research formore reasons, reading articles from The New York Times, The BBC and The Guardian. I also read articles from sports websites, websites advertising sports events and psychological journals.

| 论 据

Team sports 团队运动

  • Social skills 社交技能
  • Communication and relationship building 沟通与关系建立
  • Less solitude 少孤独
  • Make new friends 结交新朋友
  • Learn from others 从他人那里学习

Individual sports 个人运动

  • Build confidence in oneself-strong sense of accomplishment 建立自信,有强烈的责任感
  • Self discipline 自律
  • Goals achieved alone – no one else to blame for failures 独自实现的目标,没有人为失败负责
  • Builds self esteem 建立自尊
  • Fosters mental toughness 塑造心理韧性
  • Fosters personal mastery 培养个人掌控能力

| 主体内容搭建

I decided the first paragraph would focus on individual sports, and chose two points to focus on, with an example.

我将第一段重点在个人运动上,并选出两个论点和举一个例子。

  • Fosters mental toughness 塑造心理韧性
  • Build confidence in oneself-strong sense of accomplishment 建立自信,有强烈的责任感

I decided I think team sports are more beneficial, so the second paragraph gave my opinion and two reasons to develop, again with an example.

我认为团队运动更有益,所以第二段给出了我的观点和两个展开的原因,再次举了一个例子。

  • Communication and relationship building 沟通和关系的建立
  • Make new friends 结交新朋友

| 关键词组

benefits individual sports 有利于个人运动, benefits teamsports 有利于团队运动, self discipline 自律, social skills and sport 社交技能和运动, goal setting 目标设定, self esteem 自尊。

范 文

Having a healthy life style is important for each of us, and playing sports is a good way to keep active and fit. Some people believe team sports, like football, basketball and baseball have the most benefit, while others argue that individual sports, like swimming, running and surfing, are better. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

拥有健康的生活方式对我们每个人都很重要,运动是保持活力和健康的好方法。一些人认为足球、篮球和棒球等团队运动最有好处,而另一些人则认为游泳、跑步和冲浪等个人运动更好。本文将讨论这两种观点,并给出自己的观点。

keep active and fit 保持活力和健康

Individual sports build and foster mental toughness. They demand we set personal goals, and that we focus and work hard to achieve them. For example, a swimmer may set a goal to swim a length in acertain time. Because they must rely on themselves to achieve this, they build the self discipline required to get up and practise each morning, and to remain focused, even if they suffer setbacks. By doing so, individual sports also help to build one’s confidence – by reaching these personal ambitions, the individual gains a strong sense of accomplishment.

个人体育锻炼和培养心理韧性。他们要求我们设定个人目标,并要求我们集中精力,努力实现这些目标。例如,一个游泳运动员可以设定一个目标,在一定时间内游一段距离。因为他们必须依靠自己来实现这一目标,所以他们建立了每天早上起床练习所需的自律,即使遇到挫折,也要保持专注。通过这样做,个人运动也有助于建立信心——通过实现这些个人抱负,个人获得强烈的成就感。

suffer setbacks 遭遇挫折

However, I believe that team sports have more far-reaching benefits. Primarily, team sports teach us important social skills, like communicating effectively and building harmonious relationships. For example, a football player learns how to communicate with his teammates when strategising for a game, and to do so in a communal, collaborative environment. Furthermore, team sports help us to make new friends, avoiding the feelings of solitude and loneliness that individual sports can create. These skills go beyond the playing field, helping people to make real connections outside of sport, and providing us with skills we can use in all aspects of life.

我相信团队运动有更深远的好处。首先,团队运动教会我们重要的社交技能,如有效沟通和建立和谐关系。例如,足球运动员学习如何在制定比赛策略时与队友沟通,以及如何在公共协作环境中进行沟通。此外,团队运动有助于我们结交新朋友,避免个人运动可能产生的孤独感。这些技能超越了运动场,帮助人们在运动之外建立真正的联系,并为我们提供可以在生活各个方面使用的技能。

far-reaching 影响深远

strategising for a game 策划一个比赛

Though there are benefits to all sports, be they individual or team structured, I believe thatsports played with others are better at providing us with skills that can benefit us on both a personal and social level.

虽然所有的运动都有好处,无论是个人的还是团队的,但我相信与他人一起进行的运动更能为我们提供使我们在个人和社会层面都受益的技能。

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